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一段邮件内容,请求修改语法等!

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发表于 2012-9-26 13:34:49 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
以下是邮件内容,求修改!

Good morning,
Thank you for sent us Shipment Doc(INV/P/L/Bill).

For net weight,it has no follow the project list,
We need №1~№3 items respective net weight.
so,could you kindly resend the revised edition.

In addtion,In №3 tools price we want to know
why the price(REE1542/FCS)different to TYKK Invoice?
Pls see attach file.

TYKK price: USD$ 292.68
SCI price: USD$ 618.61

Thank has been concern and support,
We are looking forward to your reply.
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发表于 2012-9-26 15:13:00 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 helladise 于 2012-9-26 15:16 编辑

我看得很汗啊……
以下是修改的内容,也欢迎各家之言提出意见:

Good morning,
Thank you for sending us Shipment Doc(INV/P/L/Bill).

For net weight,it has no follow the project list, (这句我没看懂,楼主想表达什么意思?)

We need №1~№3 items according to net weight.
so,could you kindly resend the revised edition.

In addtion,In №3 tools price we want to know
why the price(REE1542/FCS)is different from TYKK Invoice?
Pls see attached file.

TYKK price: USD$ 292.68
SCI price: USD$ 618.61

Thank you for your concern and support.
We are looking forward to your reply.
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